I’m looking for critiques or feedback on the temp portfolio I’ve put together. I’m just looking to hear what people think I should be spending more time working on before I have to get it done in December to start applying for animation internships for the summer. Or is there some other work of mine you think is better than the pieces I’ve selected for this?
Really appreciate any sort of help on this! You can check it out here: travale.carbonmade.com
neomonki said:
I like the part where you started your portfolio off with a penis.
irrhythmic said:
looks great :) I’d rec not having the flasher picture up front, personally, though.
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orneryboy said:
I know you’re looking for critiques, but I just wanted to say that it all looks really good. I love the sculpture stuff! No Starburns though? ;)
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zoroko said:
Also a comment on the flasher picture, I think the censored version you have on DA would be better because of what someone else has meantioned here. But also because I found the censored picture to be slightly more humorous for some reason lol c:
racconconnoisseur said:
my critique, dang, can’t think of anything, what I seriously respect about you you really PUSH YOURSELF, your not one mold, you can change it into anything and your too DAMNED GOOD! So yeah, have an ego your awesome
nedquarters said:
I’m not saying starting with the flasher pic is bad, but… well, whoever is reviewing your portfolio is going to pass it around the office. But it does make your portfolio at the risk of them liking your humor over the style
ihearthorchata said:
yeah, YOU’RE HIRED. how’s that? i seem to remember that you did a True Blood line-up. i liked that one a lot. why not put it in?
zackules said:
Hey! It’s all really strong work. The only critique I would give is that while the 3D pieces are fantastic, they seem a little out of place. It definitely seems like a portfolio aimed at getting 2D animation work, so I would axe those.
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